Thursday, March 9, 2017

"A Piano in the House"

Joan Hackett and Barry Morse
"A Piano in the House"
Season Three, Episode 87
Original Air Date: February 16, 1962

Cast:
Fitzgerald Fortune: Barry Morse
Esther Fortune: Joan Hackett
Gregory Walker: Don Durant
Marge Moore: Muriel Landers
Throckmorton: Philip Coolidge
Marvin: Cyril Delevanti

Crew:
Writer: Earl Hamner, Jr. (original teleplay)
Director: David Greene
Producer: Buck Houghton
Production Manager: Ralph W. Nelson
Director of Photography: George T. Clemens
Art Direction: George W. Davis and Phil Barber
Set Decoration: H. Web Arrowsmith
Assistant Director: E. Darrell Hallenbeck
Casting: Stalmaster-Lister
Editor: Bill Mosher
Story Consultant: Richard McDonagh
Sound: Franklin Milton and Bill Edmondson
Music: stock

Player Piano Selections: "I'm In the Mood for Love" (music by Jimmy McHugh); "Smiles" (music by Lee Roberts); "Sabre Dance" (music by Aram Khachaturian); "These Foolish Things (Remind Me of You)" (music by Jack Strachey); "Clair de Lune" (music by Claude Debussy); "Lullaby and Goodnight" (music by Johannes Brahms)

And Now, Mr. Serling:
"Next week on The Twilight Zone we roll in a musical instrument purchased in this store. Now, there are pianos and pianos but this one was manufactured in our own very strange, unpredictable factory. It comes to you via the typewriter of Mr. Earl Hamner, and it boasts a collection of oddities and odd-ball doings. Next week you can roll up the rug as we bring you 'A Piano in the House.'"

Rod Serling's Opening Narration: 

"Mr. Fitzgerald Fortune, theater critic and cynic at-large, on his way to a birthday party. If he knew what is in store for him he probably wouldn't go, because before this evening is over that cranky old piano is going to play "Those Piano Roll Blues" with some effects that could happen only in The Twilight Zone."

Summary:
            Fitzgerald Fortune is a theater critic and intellectual snob who enjoys bullying his wife, Esther, deriding his servant, and embarrassing Esther's friends. He goes to a junk store to purchase an old player piano for Esther's birthday. Esther has aspirations to play music but Fortune does not think she has the talent to do so, thus he insensitively selects an instrument that plays itself. Fortune asks for a demonstration that the piano works and notices the strange effect of the music on the store owner. The store owner is a rude man who becomes sentimental when a love song is played. His behavior reverts back to its original state when the song ends.
            Once the piano is delivered to his home, Fortune begins to try it out on those around him. His dour servant, Marvin, becomes imbued with happy energy when an upbeat selection is played. A brooding composition reveals Esther's intense hatred of Fortune. Fortune plays a melancholy love song for their friend, Greg Walker, who reveals not only his deep love for Esther but that they are having an affair.
            As guest arrive for Esther's birthday party, Fortune continues his experiments with the piano. He selects Marge Moore from among the guests as his first victim. Marge is an overweight, gregarious woman who reveals a quiet inner self filled with longing and sadness once Fortune plays a melancholy piece on the piano. Fortune's next idea is to play a selection from Faust which will reveal any devils among the guests. Esther, however, switches the music roll to play a cradle song instead. It is Fortune who succumbs to the music, revealing himself to be nothing more than a frightened child who lashes out at those that frighten him, or those he envies.
            The guests abandon him as he throws a temper tantrum. Esther leaves with Greg and Fortune is left alone with the ruins of his life.           

Rod Serling's Closing Narration: 
"Mr. Fitzgerald Fortune, a man who went searching for concealed persons and found himself in The Twilight Zone."

Commentary:
            When Earl Hamner, Jr. arrived in California from New York in the early 1960’s, he found himself unable to get a freelance writing assignment in the film and television industry on the West Coast. Hamner was by this time a published novelist and a writer with hours of live television drama to his resume. But he had not yet written for film and found himself victim of the conundrum of needing film writing experience to get film writing assignments. Hamner labored for many months without selling his writing to the television industry but soon discovered he had a way into the industry through his past associations with the creator of The Twilight Zone.
Hamner crossed the professional path of Rod Serling before their time on the series, dating all the way back to the beginning of both men’s professional careers. Like Serling, Hamner also won a contest writing for the Dr. Christian radio show and the two writers met briefly for the occasion in 1948. In 1951, Hamner left station WLW in Cincinnati and was replaced by Rod Serling. Hamner later enjoyed telling the story that Rod Serling often (jokingly) introduced him to people as “the man who gave me my first job in the business.” It was while working at WLW and writing material for radio that Serling cut his teeth writing for dramatic television, but he did so for rival station WKRC-TV, where Serling developed the local dramatic series The Storm. Hamner steadily observed Serling’s meteoric rise in the television industry and by late 1961 decided to reach out to the writer in an attempt to secure freelance work on The Twilight Zone.
            Hamner’s strategy was to contact Serling with story ideas which Hamner felt would work for The Twilight Zone. Serling sent back the message that the story ideas would be submitted to the production team on the series. Producer Buck Houghton soon got in contact with Hamner’s agent with the news that the series was interested in buying Hamner’s stories. Houghton was wary of Hamner’s lack of film writing experience, however, and asked Hamner if he wanted to write the stories as plays instead. Hamner was determined to craft teleplays and did so ultimately to Houghton’s and Serling’s satisfaction.
            The interesting aspect of this first breakthrough for Hamner on The Twilight Zone was that it perfectly represented the dichotomy which would characterize his entire output on the series. Hamner was fundamentally concerned with crafting stories which examined the characteristics of rural life and the religious and spiritual nature of such life. He was also fascinated with the wealthy upper class. This dichotomy would also characterize his largest creative successes, the long running series The Waltons and Falcon Crest. For his first offering to The Twilight Zone, Hamner presented a humorous rural tale which was a rewrite of material he had written for a live television anthology nearly a decade before. For his second offering, written at the same time, he would craft an entirely different tale, one which was equal parts Hamner’s fascination with the wealthy class and his deliberate attempt to craft a story which was clearly in line with what the series had done before. If “A Piano in the House” feels a bit like a Rod Serling written episode, it is most assuredly by design.
            Hamner wrote “The Hunt” and “A Piano in the House” at the same time. Yet, in interviews taken with the writer over the years since the broadcast of the two episodes, Hamner recalls “The Hunt” in great detail while largely being unable to recall the inspiration for “A Piano in the House.” What Hamner did recall was that he had never moved in the circle of people depicted in “A Piano in the House” and that much of the characterization was of a purely imaginative sort, naturally leading to the broad characterizations presented in the episode, particularly in the case of the character of Fitzgerald Fortune. Hamner was also doing his best to imitate the type of stories being produced on the series. With "A Piano in the House," Hamner was particularly imitating aspects of Rod Serling’s scripts for the series in an attempt to secure acceptance of his story. An astute viewer can clearly see Bartlett Finchley (from “A Thing About Machines”) in the character of Fitzgerald Fortune, as well as the idea of supernatural machinery, something explored multiple times on the series. The tale of the enchanted object was one of the most frequently examined story types on the series, and one approached by nearly every writer on the series. Another previous Rod Serling episode, “The Whole Truth,” also shares much in common with “A Piano in the House.” In fact, “A Piano in the House” functions quite well as a combination of “A Thing About Machines” and “The Whole Truth,” even to the reasonable balance of comedy and drama with comes with combining the deadly serious former episode and the buffoonish latter offering. Not to mention the fact that Hamner’s story begins in a curio shop, hardly a novel idea when crafting a tale of fantasy and one which the show utilized a number of times.
            Despite the largely derivative nature of the episode, Hamner’s script contains a number of interesting elements. The characterizations are broad but versatile enough for the excellent cast to push the characterizations in interesting directions. Of course, the four principle actors are forced to essentially play two characters and all excel at the challenge.
        
    Barry Morse (1918-2008) relishes the role of the sadistic theater critic Fitzgerald Fortune and plays it to the hilt. Despite a broad role which any competent actor could reasonably bring off, Morse is still magnetic on screen, a perfectly uncomplicated villain. Uncomplicated that is, until his inner self is revealed at the episode’s end. Hamner’s dialogue in particular shines through in Morse’s interpretation of the character. Like most actors of his generation, the English Morse honed his skills on the stage, moving into film work in the 1940’s. Morse is remembered today for his long running role as Detective Philip Gerard, who pursued David Janssen in The Fugitive. Science fiction fans will remember Morse from the whacky first season Outer Limits episode “Controlled Experiment,” in which he played a Martian alongside Carroll O’Connor. Morse also featured in one of the more memorable episodes of the largely forgotten anthology series ‘Way Out, which was a companion series of sorts for The Twilight Zone during the Zone’s second season. Lasting only 14 episodes, ‘Way Out was a fantasy anthology series developed by David Susskind and hosted by Roald Dahl, with a hosting style very much in the manner of Rod Serling. Despite the generally high quality of the episodes, it was not renewed. Morse featured in an episode titled “Soft Focus” about a photographer who discovers a chemical that can alter the appearance of a person in a photograph while also effecting the same alteration in real life. That episode also shows Morse’s character battling his wife to his ultimate defeat. In this case, half of Morse’s face is removed when his wife splashes the effective chemical across his photograph. Half of Morse’s face was removed in a very memorable makeup effect from Academy Award-winning artist Dick Smith, who functioned for ‘Way Out much in the same capacity as William Tuttle for The Twilight Zone. Morse also has credits on Suspense, The Alfred Hitchcock Hour, The Invaders, The Starlost, Space: 1999, The Martian Chronicles, The Ray Bradbury Theatre, Dracula: the Series, and in “The Weird Tailor” segment of the 1972 horror anthology film Asylum, scripted by Robert Bloch.*
            Playing the soft spoken and subservient wife Esther is actress Joan Hackett (1934-1983). Hackett brings an essential quiet rage to the role which perfectly suits the inner fire and passion illuminated when the player piano reveals her secret self. Hackett began her career in television and largely remained there throughout her life, with intermittent stage and film work. Fantasy fans will likely remember Hackett as the mother who attempts to bring her son back from the dead with horrifying results in the “Bobby” segment of the 1977 film, Dead of Night. That film was one of a number of collaborations between Twilight Zone writer Richard Matheson and producer/director Dan Curtis, a collaboration which yielded the films The Night Stalker (1972) and Trilogy of Terror (1975). Hackett also appeared in episodes of Alfred Hitchcock Presents, The Alfred Hitchcock Hour, and Tales of the Unexpected. Known for being a perfectionist in her craft, and therefore often considered difficult to work with**, Hackett brings an assuredness to the character of Esther and a subtle complexity to her transition by episode’s end. Hackett passed away from cancer at the young age of 49 in 1983.
            Despite the strong appearances of Morse and Hackett, the standout performance clearly belongs to Muriel Landers as Marge Moore. Landers (1921-1977) is simply heartbreaking in her characterization of an overweight woman whose gregarious nature provides shelter against her insecurities; insecurities which are revealed in a singularly arresting scene that sees the talented Landers hypnotized by the lulling melody of an ode to moonlight. Landers was a highly talented actress who was also an accomplished singer and dancer, skills which were frequently utilized when she found success in comedic work. One of Landers's earliest credits is in an episode of the suspense anthology series The Clock ("Rumble in Manhattan"), and she began her film career in 1952 with the comedy Bela Lugosi Meets a Brooklyn Gorilla, which sees Lugosi alongside the unfunny duo of Duke Mitchell and Sammy Petrillo, who perform in imitation of Dean Martin and Jerry Lewis. Landers soon found her niche in television variety programs and in short comedy subjects, such as the well-regarded Three Stooges short, Sweet and Hot (1958). Landers found roles in the romantic comedy Pillow Talk (1959) and with Jerry Lewis in The Disorderly Orderly (1964). On television, she appeared on Rowan and Martin’s Laugh-In and on Hogan’s Heroes. Despite her long career in comedy, Landers clearly possessed a talent that worked well in a dramatic context. Her performance is not only the most memorable aspect of “A Piano in the House” but is quite likely one of the most memorable from the entire series.
            Rounding out the main cast is Don Durant (1932-2005), a Californian who worked as a singer and actor in advertising before establishing himself on television in the short-lived CBS western Johnny Ringo. Durant acquits himself well in the episode as the sensitive, love-struck writer with the masculine exterior. Veteran character actors Cyril Delevanti (1889-1975) and Philip Coolidge (1908-1967) also make appearances. English actor Delevanti is in the rarefied company of those who have performed in four episodes of The Twilight Zone. Delevanti looked much older than his actual age and it secured him a number of roles as a quiet, elderly man. Delevanti worked in films since the early sound era and his genre credits include episodes of Science Fiction Theatre, Suspicion, Alcoa Presents: One Step Beyond, Alfred Hitchcock Presents, Thriller, Voyage to the Bottom of the Sea, and Rod Serling’s Night Gallery. Here, Delevanti is tasked with the most abrupt change in character as the morose servant turned jubilant. Philip Coolidge has a similar challenge as the gruff store owner turned into a man with a secret sentimental side. Coolidge frequently worked in genre programs, including a memorable episode of ‘Way Out, "Hush-Hush," in which he plays a husband who attempts to silence his talkative wife with devastating results. Coolidge also appeared in episodes of Suspense, The Clock, Lights Out, Climax!, Alfred Hitchcock Presents, and The Alfred Hitchcock Hour.
            Director David Greene (1921-2003) was at the helm for only this single episode of the series but his approach to the subject is superb. One of the advantages of film (as opposed to the static camera setup for videotape) is the fluidity of camera movement allotted a director. This allowed a number of the show’s directors, particularly those instinctively in line with the show’s subject matter (John Brahm, Douglas Heyes, James Sheldon, Lamont Johnson, etc.) to use the camera in a style which reflected the individuality of each episode. Despite the confined setting of the story, Greene’s camera never seems to stand still, and he works an effective combination of extreme close-ups, wide angle views, and subjective character shots with a sweeping, energetic style. His filming of the dance performed by Muriel Landers is poignant and compelling, but perhaps his most effective shot is that which exposes Fitzgerald Fortune’s secret self. Greene moves the camera in a sweeping back and forth shot which mirrors the turning heads of the party guests. Greene honed his skills in the early days of anthology programs, including two episodes of Alfred Hitchcock's Suspicion, and later became a noted director of television miniseries, winning Emmy Awards for his direction of Rich Man, Poor Man (1976) and Roots (part one, 1977). 
            Though the episode uses stock music cues, it is greatly enhanced by a number of musical selections for the reproducing piano which are expertly chosen and work to reveal a concealed inner self in each of the characters. The selection which reveals a sentimental side to the gruff store owner is “I’m in the Mood for Love,” with music by Jimmy McHugh. The song was first heard in 1935 in the film Every Night at Eight, with lyrics by Dorothy Fields. The song which moves the dour butler to happy energy is “Smiles,” with music by Lee Roberts. The song was first heard on Broadway for The Passing Show of 1918, with lyrics by J. Will Callahan. The familiar song which reveals Esther’s inner rage is “Sabre Dance” by Aram Khachaturian, from his 1942 ballet, Gayane. The energetic piece is surely one of the most recognizable pieces of music in the western canon. Greg is compelled to reveal his love for Esther with “These Foolish Things (Remind Me of You),” with music by Jack Strachey. The music was written for lyrics by Eric Maschwitz (Holt Marvell), and the most famous version was recorded by Billie Holiday, who performed it with Teddy Wilson’s Orchestra in 1936. Muriel Landers’s memorable dance and poetic soliloquy is brought on by Claude Debussy’s “Clair de Lune” (or “Moonlight”). Inspired by a poem from Paul Verlaine, Debussy composed the song for the musical suite bergamasque. Finally, the song which ruins Fitzgerald Fortune by revealing his frightened inner child is the classic cradle song “Lullaby and Good Night” from Johannes Brahms. Inspired by German folklore and first performed in 1869, Brahms's lullaby has assisted parents in putting their children to bed for generations. It is interesting to note here that Fitzgerald Fortune wanted to play a selection titled “Faust,” which is likely “The Damnation of Faust” from French composer Hector Berlioz, whose darkly melodic work was first heard in Paris in 1846. 
            For his second offering to the series, Hamner presented a character-rich morality play which examined the secret inner lives each of us harbor within and the danger of seeking out concealed persons among friends and acquaintances. Filled with solid characterizations, a capable cast, a standout performance from Muriel Landers, great music, and David Greene’s innovative use of the camera within the closed confines of the setting mark “A Piano in the House” an episode with enough interesting and unusual aspects to mark it a cut above the show’s average offering.               

Grade: B

Grateful acknowledgement is made to the following for information contained in the commentary:

-The Twilight Zone Scripts of Earl Hamner by Earl Hamner (with commentary by Tony Albarella) (Cumberland House, 2003)

-The Twilight Zone: Unlocking the Door to a Television Classic by Martin Grams, Jr. (OTR, 2008)

-The Billboard Encyclopedia of Classical Music, general editor: Stanley Sadie (Billboard Books, 2004)

-Marc Scott Zicree interview with producer Buck Houghton (included as a commentary track on “A Piano in the House” from the Definitive Edition DVD of the series).

-“Earl Hamner Discusses Writing for The Twilight Zone,” interview segment with Earl Hamner, Jr. from the Archive of American Television (TV Legends).

*Asylum was one of a number of excellent horror anthology films from Amicus Productions in the 1960's and 1970's. The Amicus films were heavily inspired by the excellent and influential 1945 anthology film Dead of Night  from Ealing Studios. Other Amicus anthology films include Dr. Terror's House of Horrors (1965), Torture Garden (1967, scripted by Robert Bloch), The House that Dripped Blood (scripted by Bloch), Tales from the Crypt (1972, based on the famous EC Comics), The Vault of Horror (1973, EC Comics), and From Beyond the Grave (1973). "The Weird Tailor" segment in which Morse appears was previously adapted by Robert Bloch for Boris Karloff's Thriller. Though Bloch never wrote for The Twilight Zone, he later adapted the screenplay for 1983's Twilight Zone: The Movie into prose. 

**Although producer Buck Houghton does not remember Hackett being difficult to work with he did recall to author Marc Scott Zicree that the actress was very anxious during the filming of "A Piano in the House." 

Notes:
-Earl Hamner came to enjoy the creative freedom offered by the series and created a diverse body of 8 episodes consisting of “The Hunt,” “Jess-Belle,” “Ring-a-Ding Girl,” “You Drive,” “Black Leather Jackets,” “Stopover in a Quiet Town,” and the final broadcast episode, “The Bewitchin’ Pool.”
-Barry Morse also appeared in an episode of the first revival Twilight Zone series titled “Dream Me a Life,” from the third season.
-Joan Hackett also appeared in the 1977 film Dead of Night, in the memorable final segment, “Bobby,” which was based on a script by Richard Matheson.
-Cyril Delevanti appears in three additional episodes of The Twilight Zone: “A Penny for Your Thoughts” and “The Silence” from season two, and “Passage on the Lady Anne” from season four. He also appeared in an episode of Rod Serling’s Night Gallery titled “The Sins of the Fathers.”
-“A Piano in the House” appears in The Twilight Zone Scripts of Earl Hamner, with commentary by Tony Albarella (Cumberland House, 2003).
-“A Piano in the House” was adapted as a Twilight Zone Radio Drama starring Michael York.
-Earl Hamner originally submitted this story under the title “Won’t You Play a Simple Melody?”
-The piano used in the episode is an Ampico Reproducing Piano. Ampico is a shortening of the name of the American Piano Company from East Rochester, NY. The company began manufacturing reproducing pianos in 1913. Visit here for more information about the reproducing piano. 

-JP

Monday, March 6, 2017

Happy Birthday to William F. Nolan

William F. Nolan


Join us in wishing a happy birthday to the legendary William F. Nolan who turns 89 today!

Born in 1928, Nolan is a renowned writer, editor, artist, and historian whose career spans over half a century. During the 1950’s and 60’s he was part of a close community of writers in the Los Angeles area collectively known as the Southern California School of Writers—or simply the Group—which also included prominent Twilight Zone writers Charles Beaumont, George Clayton Johnson, Richard Matheson, Ray Bradbury, John Tomerlin, and Jerry Sohl. Although he never wrote an episode of show, Nolan’s presence can be felt in almost every chapter of its history. He was close friends with many of the show's writers and features prominently in their recollections of the time. He was particularly close to Beaumont, Johnson, and Tomerlin and the quartet would spend hours driving around Los Angeles, eating at all-night diners, talking about books and writing, critiquing each other’s work, and often taking impulsive jaunts halfway around the world to meet Ian Fleming or revel in Monte Carlo or the Bahamas. In 1962 Nolan, Johnson, and Beaumont all had roles in Roger Corman's The Intruder based on Beaumont's novel. In interviews Johnson often recalled that he wrote part of "Kick the Can" while he and Nolan drove back to California from shooting in Missouri. Nolan and Johnson also collaborated on an unproduced teleplay for The Twilight Zone called “Dreamflight” about a woman whose recurrent nightmare of dying in a plane crash begins to manifest itself into reality. It was likely abandoned due to scheduling reasons. Nolan was also the inspiration for Charley Parkes (Robert Duvall's character) in Beaumont's fourth season episode "Miniature." In an interview with Marc Scott Zicree, Nolan explains that Beaumont confessed to him that he created the shy, soft-spoken Parkes using Nolan as a muse.

A prolific writer of both fiction and nonfiction Nolan is the co-author, with Johnson, of the landmark science fiction novel Logan’s Run (1967), and author of its sequels and various graphic adaptations. In 2001 his short fiction was collected in the career retrospective Dark Universe: Stories 1951 – 2001 from Stealth Press. An auto-racing enthusiast, he and Beaumont edited two volumes of stories and essays about motorsports, Omnibus of Speed: An Introduction to the World of Motor Sport (1958) and When Engines Roar (1964). In 1991 he co-edited The Bradbury Chronicles: Stories in Honor of Ray Bradbury with Martin H. Greenberg and in 1999 he co-edited California Sorcery with William Schafer, an anthology of short stories celebrating the Group. In 1975 he adapted Matheson’s stories “The Likeness of Julie” and “Therese” (aka “Needle in the Heart”) for Dan Curtis’s anthology film Trilogy of Terror which aired on ABC. The following year he and Curtis co-wrote a screenplay based on Robert Marasco’s novel Burnt Offerings for United Artist which starred Karen Black, Oliver Reed, Bette Davis, and Burgess Meredith. In 1975 he published The Ray Bradbury Companion: A Life and Career History and in 1986 he published The Work of Charles Beaumont: An Annotated Bibliography. He is the recipient of two Edgar Allan Poe Special Awards, a World Fantasy Award, a Bram Stoker Lifetime Achievement Award from the Horror Writers Association, and the Author Emeritus Award from the Science Fiction Writers of America. He is a World Horror Society Grand Master and was voted a Living Legend by the International Horror Guild. In 1991 Newsweek chose his story "The Party" (1967) as one of the seven most effective horror stories of the twentieth century.




At 89, Nolan is still active in the speculative fiction world and attends conventions and grants interviews regularly. He co-edited two anthologies from Cycatrix Press with Jason V. Brock, The Bleeding Edge: Dark Barriers, Dark Frontiers (2009) and The Devil’s Coattails: More Dispatches from the Dark Frontier (2011). In 2013 Dark Regions Press published a new collection of his short fiction entitled Like a Dead Man Walking and Other Shadow Tales. And in 2014 he received a Bram Stoker Award for his memoir Nolan on Bradbury: Sixty Years of Writing about the Master of Science Fiction.

Cheers to you, Mr. Nolan.



Sunday, February 26, 2017

"Kick the Can"


Mr. Charles Whitley (Ernest Truex) remembering a life forgotten.

“Kick the Can”
Season Three, Episode 86
Original Air Date: February 9, 1962

Cast:
Charles Whitley: Ernest Truex
Ben Conroy: Russell Collins
Mr. Cox: John Marley
Frietag: Hank Patterson
Mr. Agee: Earl Hodges
Mrs. Summers: Marjorie Bennett
Mrs. Densley: Lenore Shanewise
Mrs. Wister: Anne O’Neal
Mr. Carlson: Burt Mustin
David Whitley: Barry Truex
Nurse: Eve McVeagh
Boy #1: Gregory McCabe
Boy #2: Marc Stevens

Crew:
Writer: George Clayton Johnson (original teleplay)
Director: Lamont Johnson
Producer: Buck Houghton
Production Manager: Ralph W. Nelson
Director of Photography: George T. Clemens
Art Direction: George W. Davis and Phil Barber
Set Decoration: George R. Nelson
Assistant Director: E. Darrell Hallenbeck
Casting: Stalmaster-Lister
Editor: Bill Mosher
Story Consultant: Richard McDonagh
Sound: Franklin Milton and Bill Edmondson
Music: stock

And Now, Mr. Serling:
“For all of us, even the most young at heart, I suppose there’s a little kernel of want having to do with reliving childhood, that grand and glorious moment in time when the biggest guy around is the patrol boy. Next week on the Twilight Zone this moment is recaptured in George Clayton Johnson’s exceptionally sensitive story called ‘Kick the Can.’ It co-stars Mr. Ernest Truex and Mr. Russell Collins.

“If the tobaccos in a cigarette are good enough, they alone will give mellow richness and satisfactory mildness. Try Chesterfields and you’ll discover twenty-one great tobaccos make twenty wonderful smokes.”

Rod Serling’s Opening Narration:
“Sunnyvale Rest: a home for the aged. A dying place. And a common children’s game called kick the can that will shortly become a refuge for a man who knows he will die in this world if he doesn’t escape…into the Twilight Zone.”



Summary:

Charles Whitley is an elderly man who resides at a small retirement home called Sunnyvale Rest. He and the other residents spend their days knitting or watching television, talking about things that do not matter, and looking for anything that may remind them that their life is not yet over. Whitley announces one afternoon that he is leaving Sunnyvale and going to live with his son. His announcement is met with skepticism. His son arrives and tells him that he will not be able to house him and that he must stay at the rest home. Whitley walks through the vacant lot next to the facility. He sees a group of boys playing a game of kick the can and sits beneath a tree and watches for a while.

Later, in his room, Whitley tells one of the other residents, Ben, that he misses his youth. He misses playing games like kick the can. He wonders if there is a secret to staying young. Ben dismisses this as wishful thinking and tells Whitley that he should accept his age and be thankful that he has lived a long life. 

That night, Whitley wakes up all of the residents and asks them if they want to play kick the can. Perhaps youth is only an idea, he says, and maybe acting youthful will somehow keep them young. He convinces them to sneak past the night nurse and venture outside.

Alarmed that his friend may be suffering a mental breakdown, Ben wakes the head caregiver and informs him that Whitley and the others have broken curfew by going outside. When they arrive outside, however, they find only children. Ben spots a boy playing tag and realizes that it is Whitley. He begs Whitley to take him with them, to make him young again. But the boy only stares back at him silently and then runs off into the woods with the others. The old man picks up the can and walks quietly back into the empty rest home.

Rod Serling’s Closing Narration:
“Sunnyvale Rest. A dying place for ancient people who have forgotten the fragile magic of youth. A dying place for those who have forgotten that childhood, maturity, and old age are curiously intertwined and not separate. A dying place for those who have grown too stiff in their thinking to visit…the Twilight Zone.”

Commentary:

“Kick the Can” is the fourth original teleplay from writer George Clayton Johnson. Unfortunately, it would also be his last. Before coming to write for The Twilight Zone Johnson had little experience writing professionally and had never written for television. Still, he hit a creative stride on the show that was unprecedented for even a seasoned veteran. His scripts were thoughtful and mature and they drew the audience in and convinced them to care about the characters, even ones like Jesse Cardiff and Ben Conroy. But his time with the show was more or less over. His work would appear on the program one last time during the fifth season but the experience would be a bitter one.

At the end of the fourth season Johnson submitted a story to producer Bert Granet called “The Grandfather Clock” about an elderly man who is emotionally dependent upon a wind-up grandfather clock. He believes that if the clock stops ticking he will die. His loved ones watch helplessly as he sinks further and further into his obsession. At the end of the story he dies after the clock falls on top of him and stops ticking. The moment the clock is repaired and begins to tick again the old man’s granddaughter gives birth. Granet liked the idea and told him to flesh it out into a teleplay. By the time he submitted it to the show, however, William Froug had taken over as producer. Convinced it wouldn’t work as an episode, Froug gave it to writer Richard DeRoy to adapt. DeRoy kept Johnson’s concept but changed the ending so that the old man realizes that he no longer needs the clock and is permitted to live. Johnson was so dissatisfied with the episode that he removed his name from it—the only person to ever do so during the show’s five year run—and used the pseudonym “Johnson Smith” instead. The episode remains enjoyable, thanks largely to a great cast and a very moving musical score from Bernard Herman, but it lacks the emotional resonance found in his earlier episodes. After four teleplays of his own and four adaptations of his work, this was how George Clayton Johnson departed The Twilight Zone.

Before we go any further let’s talk about “Dreamflight.” At some point between selling “Kick the Can” in 1962 and the show’s cancellation in 1964, Johnson co-wrote an original teleplay with friend and frequent collaborator William F. Nolan called “Dreamflight," about a woman living with a recurring nightmare in which she is a passenger on an airplane that gradually begins to shut down before falling out of the sky. Several days later she boards a real airplane and notices the exact same sequence of events from her dream starting to unfold there. She begins to panic. The man sitting next to her does his best to distract her from her thoughts and they develop a connection. By the end of the flight she has forgotten the nightmare and is finally ready to move forward with her life. The plane lands safely and the story ends. The fantasy element here is ambiguous much like the supernatural abilities of the Mystic Seer in “Nick of Time.” The protagonist chooses not to fall victim to her own mind and is willing to take steps to prevent this from happening much like William Shatner in the earlier episode.

There appears to be some confusion as to when “Dreamflight” was sold to the show. The dates given by past researchers vary considerably, as do the reasons for why it was never made into an episode. Many, including Nolan, say that it was submitted to the show near the end of season three. This meant that Buck Houghton would have been the one to decide its fate. No definitive reason as to why this one never made it past the writing phase has ever really been given although many believe that the script was not completed in time to be included in the third season and was abandoned altogether once the show went off the air at the end of the season. However, when asked about this project in interviews Johnson recalled selling it to producer William Froug during the fifth season. Like the first scenario, the timing was not in their favor and the show went off the air for good before the script could be filmed. Another reason the producers may have been reluctant to jump into production on the script was the show’s ever-growing catalog of episodes dealing with airplanes or air travel, particularly Serling’s “Twenty-Two” and Matheson’s “Nightmare at 20,000 Feet” both of which bear a resemblance to “Dreamflight.” On an interesting side note, Johnson said that he wrote the first draft of "Kick the Can" while he and Nolan were driving back to Los Angeles from Missouri where the filming of Roger Corman's The Intruder (1962) had just wrapped. The film was adapted by Beaumont from his novel and featured Nolan and Johnson in bit roles. Read more about "Dreamflight" in our interview with William F. Nolan here.

At the same time that he was penning episodes of The Twilight Zone, Johnson’s work was also appearing on shows like Alfred Hitchcock Presents ("I'll Take Care of You," also featuring Russell Collins), Route 66, The Law and Mr. Jones, and several others. In 1960 the original Ocean's 11 film starring Frank Sinatra finally premiered in theaters. Johnson co-wrote the initial draft of the
Logan's Run, 1967
screenplay with Jack Golden Russell five years earlier. The film was a huge success and Johnson and Russell—along with Harry Brown and Charles Lederer who were brought in for screenplay revisions—were nominated for a Writer’s Guild of America Award. In 1962 he collaborated with friend and mentor Ray Bradbury on an animated short film based on Bradbury’s story “Icarus Montgolfier Wright” which was nominated for an Academy Award. He also saw several of his short stories appear in magazines like Rogue and Gamma. In 1966 he wrote the premiere episode of Star Trek called “The Man Trap.” In 1967 Johnson collaborated with William F. Nolan once again on the landmark science fiction novel Logan's Run (Dial Press) about a dystopian society where people are euthanized at the age of twenty-one. The book was a huge success which spawned two sequels written by Nolan, a 1976 feature film directed by Michael Anderson, a short-lived television series in 1977, and several graphic adaptations.

Johnson found himself roaming the fifth dimension throughout much of the 1980’s starting with the publication of a small collection of stories and essays called Writing for the Twilight Zone in 1980. In 1981 Rod Serling’s The Twilight Zone Magazine began an impressive eight year run with author T.E.D. Klein as its first editor. The magazine published several of Johnson’s essays and short stories during its reign including his story “Sea Change,” in which the protagonist loses his hand only to have another one grow back in its place. Serling bought the story for the original series in 1960 but had to sell it back to Johnson amid concerns that the sponsors would find it too violent. The 1980’s revival series remade “A Game of Pool” using Johnson’s original ending during its final season.

Most notable, of course, is the remake of “Kick the Can” for Twilight Zone: The Movie in 1983. In 1982 Warner Brothers contacted Johnson wanting to purchase the screen rights to the story. Johnson was hesitant at first but after learning of Carol Serling’s involvement and that Richard Matheson would write the screenplay he agreed to let them adapt his story. But before he did so he met with Frank Marshall and Kathleen Kennedy of Amblin Entertainment and gave them a short, three page outline which contained a new ending to his story. Johnson felt that his original teleplay was a bit irresponsible in that it failed to portray the reality of the situation. These kids were now on their own with no one to take care of them. The outline featured an additional sequence which began where the original story ended, with the kids running off into the woods. It follows the kids on their adventure through the woods, laughing and playing, lost in the exhilaration of youth. As the excitement fades they grow tired and hungry and scared. The consequences of their actions become a reality. They stumble upon the rest home, unfamiliar to them now, and climb into the warm beds where they are transformed back into their older selves. Matheson kept Johnson’s idea but condensed it for time, eliminating the scenes of the children in the woods. This earned Johnson screen credit as well as story credit for his original teleplay. After Matheson submitted his final script to Warner Brothers, however, director/producer Steven Spielberg gave it to screenwriter Mellissa Mathison for revision. Spielberg had just worked with Mathison on E.T. earlier that year and felt that she could give the story a softer, whimsical quality. The result is a syrupy-sweet disaster with unnecessary special effects which bears little resemblance to the original episode.

"Kick the Can" segment in
Twilight Zone: The Movie (1983)
directed by Steven Spielberg

In Spielberg’s version the residents don’t discover the magic of playing kick the can for themselves. Instead a traveling gypsy-like character named Mr. Bloom, played by Scatman Crothers, provides the magic for them. This places all of the importance on Bloom instead of on the residents and their spiritual enlightenment which is the foundation of the story. It also removes the relationship between Whitley and Conroy which is another important element of the original episode. Aside from this the segment is filled with formulaic characters, atrocious dialogue, a badly miscast leading man, and a significant emotional scene that depends almost exclusively on the performances of small children, a risky choice that proved to be a bad one. Despite a talented director and three very talented writers this version is almost unwatchable and is generally considered the worst segment of the film.

Robert Bloch’s official novelization of the film is quite different from Spielberg’s version. As we mentioned in our review of the book, Bloch was given an early draft of the screenplay. His version features a humorous opening scene in which Bloom is checking into Sunnyvale and a dream montage which occurs before all of the residents go outside to play kick the can. It is also void of the overbearing visual effects, hideous set designs, and awkward dialogue that saturate the film. Those who were disappointed with the movie may find Bloch’s laid-back approach more enjoyable.

When George Clayton Johnson wrote this teleplay he was 32 years old. Three of his Twilight Zone episodes, “Nothing in the Dark,”  “Ninety Years Without Slumbering,” and “Kick the Can” all concern growing old, facing death, and losing one’s self to fear and time. It is interesting that a young writer would be able to create accurate and compelling characters that are significantly older than he is. Johnson does not judge or exploit his characters and gives them sympathetic personalities that are easily approachable. In fact, most of the show’s regular writers were in their thirties at the time yet most wrote about the aging process frequently. Matheson wrote “Night Call” and “Spur of the Moment,” both rather bleak episodes about aging. Beaumont wrote “Static” and “Long Live Walter Jameson,” both stories about escaping old age. He also wrote “Passage on the Lady Anne” to the opposite effect. Serling wrote a handful of episodes about aging most notably “The Changing of the Guard,” “The Sixteen Millimeter Shrine,” and “The Trade Ins.” He also adapted “Of Late I think of Cliffordville” from a Malcolm Jameson short story and “A Short Drink from a Certain Fountain” from a story by Lou Holtz.

Johnson said he got the idea for this episode while trying to remember the rules to kick the can, a game he played frequently as a kid, and discovering that he could not. This loss of memory caused Johnson to think that maybe he had lost his youth to time and old age. After realizing that old age is not as black and white as it is often depicted as being, Johnson came up with the idea for “Kick the Can.” Ironically, his decision to approach the movie version with a more mature philosophy directly contradicts the message of the original episode.

Director Lamont Johnson, who added an immeasurable depth to George Clayton Johnson’s previous episode “Nothing in the Dark,” lends his distinctive personality to “Kick the Can” as well. This was his fifth episode of the show, all of which were made within a few short months, and by this time Johnson had a definite understanding of the show’s personality. He knew, almost instinctively it seems, what type of direction was suitable for an episode simply based on the script. Many of his episodes, like “Five Characters in Search of an Exit,” “The Shelter,” and “Passage on the Lady Anne” are heavily stylized and feature unconventional lighting and camera angles which give them an immediately noticeable quality. His direction here is a bit more reserved but he still manages to use the camera to his benefit in several places.

“Kick the Can” is one of the best episodes The Twilight Zone produced during its five year run and has become a classic piece of American television. Writing about characters so far removed from himself could have been a risky decision for George Clayton Johnson. But he delivers a brilliant story that is equal parts sentimental and haunting. Even when the action appears to be taking a turn for the hokey he and director Lamont Johnson manage to keep it grounded in rationality. It is entertaining but still accomplishes what every piece of superior art strives for which is to show its audience a part of themselves that they were unaware of. With a great cast, two fantastic leading performances, amazing direction and a wonderful script “Kick the Can” can easily stand as an example of why The Twilight Zone remains one of the best television programs of all time.



George Clayton Johnson
1929 - 2015




Grade: A


Grateful acknowledgement to:

Archive of American Television:
--Interview with George Clayton Johnson; conducted by Gary Rutkowski (September, 2003)

The Twilight Zone Definitive Edition DVD, Season Five (Image Entertainment, 2004)
--Video Interview with George Clayton Johnson

Twilight Zone Scripts and Stories by George Clayton Johnson (Streamline Pictures, 1996)

All of Us Are Dying and Other Stories by George Clayton Johnson (Subterranean Press, 1999)

Dimensions Behind the Twilight Zone by Stewart Stanyard (ECW Press, 2007)

Forgotten Gems from the Twilight Zone: Volume 2 edited by Andrew Ramage (BearManor Media, 2005)

More Giants of the Genre by Michael McCarty (Wildside Press, 2005)

Internet Speculative Fiction Database


Notes:
--Ernest Truex also appears in Serling’s adaptation of Henry Kuttner and C.L. Moore’s “What You Need” in the first season.
--John Marley also appears in Serling’s adaptation of Henry Slesar’s story “The Old Man” (as “The Old Man in the Cave”) during the fifth season.
--Marjorie Bennett also appears in season one’s “The Chaser” adapted by Robert Presnell, Jr. from the story by John Collier and in Serling’s season four episode “No Time Like the Past.” She also appeared in a season two segment of Night Gallery called “Deliveries in the Rear” which was written by Serling.
--Hank Peterson also appears in the fifth season episodes “Ring-a-Ding Girl” and “Come Wander with Me.” He also has a role in an episode of The Loner called “The Sherriff of Fetterman’s Crossing.”
--Burt Muslin also appears in “Night of the Meek” during the second season.
--The role of Charles Whitley’s son David Whitley is played by Ernest Truex’s son, actor Barry Truex, although he receives no screen credit.
-- Eve McVeagh also appears in the season five episode “I Am the Night—Color Me Black.”
--Lamont Johnson directed eight episodes of the show including “The Shelter,” “Five Characters in Search of an Exit,” “Nothing in the Dark” and “Four O’Clock” for season three and “A Passage on the Lady Anne” for season four.
--George Clayton Johnson wrote four original teleplays for the show: “A Penny for Your Thoughts” for season two and “A Game of Pool,” “Nothing in the Dark” and “Kick the Can” for season three. His stories “All of Us Are Dying” (“The Four of Us Are Dying”) and “Execution” were adapted by Serling for the first season and Charles Beaumont adapted his story “The Prime Mover” for the second season. As mentioned, his fifth season episode “Ninety Years Without Slumbering” was re-written by Richard DeRoy as per producer William Froug which prompted Johnson to use the pseudonym Johnson Smith as his by-line.
--“Kick the Can” was famously made into the second segment of Twilight Zone: The Movie by Steven Spielberg in 1983. Johnson received story credit and shared screenplay credit with Richard Matheson and Mellissa Mathison (writing as Josh Rogan). This segment was also adapted into prose form by Robert Bloch in his official novelization of the film, released by Warner Books.
--"Dreamflight" was finally published in Forgotten Gems from the Twilight Zone: Volume 2 edited by Andrew Ramage (BearManor Media, 2005).
--Listen to the Twilight Zone Radio Drama starring Shelley Berman and Stan Freberg.


--Brian

Monday, February 20, 2017

BOOK REVIEW: Another Day, Another Twilight Zone Tribute


Award-winning author Christopher Conlon returns to the Vortex with a review of a new Twilight Zone book hitting shelves at the end of February. Chris is the author of numerous novels and short stories as well as an accomplished editor. As an editor he's gifted Zone fans with Filet of Sohl: The Classic Scripts and Stories of Jerry Sohl, The Twilight Zone Scripts of Jerry Sohl, and He Is Legend: An Anthology Celebrating Richard Matheson. Chris has also written "Southern California Sorcerers," the definitive account of "The Group," the Southern California based writers who wrote so many influential novels, short stories, films, and television programs during the 1950s and 1960s, including the bulk of Twilight Zone episodes. Chris's most recent book  is Rossum's Universal Replicas: Karel Capek's "R.U.R." Reimagined, a fresh take on a pioneering work of artificial intelligence and the fate of humankind. Chris can be found at his homepage.

-JP  

Dawidziak, Mark. Everything I Need to Know I Learned in the Twilight Zone. New York: Thomas Dunne Books/St. Martin’s Press, 2017.

Of all the series from the early black-and-white era of American television, few have been more popular—not to mention analyzed, memorialized, and tributized—than The Twilight Zone. As author Mark Dawidziak points out in his new book, Everything I Need to Know I Learned in the Twilight Zone, Serling’s seminal program keeps “making the jump” from generation to generation in a way that only a single other series from that period, I Love Lucy, has done. “My students no longer know bus driver Ralph Kramden, deputy Barney Fife, or comedy writer Rob Petrie,” states Dawidziak. “But they still have spent some time with the Ricardos and in Serling’s ‘middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition.’” The continuing relevance of Rod Serling’s brainchild has led to a seemingly endless outpouring of tributes of all kinds, from books to movies to TV shows, a radio series, comic books, websites, blogs…somehow Twilight Zone just goes on and on, and pretty much everybody, it sometimes seems, wants to tell us all about it.

Into this crowded field of TZ tributes now comes Mark Dawidziak’s tome, subtitled “A Fifth-Dimension Guide to Life.” Taking its approach from the world of self-help books, the idea is to discuss various TZ episodes through the “life lessons” they teach, thus guiding us in our daily lives (“Submitted for Your Improvement,” in Dawidziak’s clever phrase). The tone throughout the book is light—clearly we’re not to take these lessons too seriously—and overall the effect is of a kind of easy breeziness. It’s not difficult to keep turning the pages, though for a lightweight project like this, 300+ pages seems a good deal more than anyone could possibly need.

Initially the book is rather fun. It’s divided into fifty distinct “Lessons,” and it’s entertaining to try to figure out from the Table of Contents which episodes the author might connect to which lessons. (The episodes are identified only within the text itself.) See if you can guess which episode(s) these “lessons” refer to (answers appear at the end of this review).

          a)-When nobody else believes in you, keep believing in yourself
      b)-That which doesn’t kill you makes you stronger
      c)- Share with others
      d)- Nobody said life was fair
      e)-Divided we fall (two episodes)

Despite this relatively promising start, though, Everything I Need to Know I Learned in the Twilight Zone quickly begins to run out of steam upon arrival at the actual episode discussions. The problem is perhaps inimical to the nature of this project: all the author can do in each lesson is reiterate what is already clear from the title of the lesson itself. Thus in “Beauty truly is in…” we are treated to a summary “Eye of the Beholder,” a few brief quotes from actress Donna Douglas, and a couple of pages explaining how the story fits the “Beauty truly is in…” homily—which must surely be obvious to anyone who has simply watched the episode. It’s certainly true, as Dawidziak argues, that “lurking in almost every episode of The Twilight Zone is at least one guiding rule, one life lesson, one stirring reminder of a basic right or wrong taught to us as children,” but when it comes to Serling’s approach to these “lessons,” few have ever accused him of subtlety. As a result, Dawidziak’s discussions tend to merely rehash and belabor the obvious.

Reading through these many pages it’s possible to wonder who the intended audience is for this book. One might guess it’s for relative newcomers to the series, given the shallowness of the analyses, but no: plot-reveals abound here, as the author acknowledges in his early chapter, “One Giant Spoiler Alert.” A TZ neophyte, then, would only be annoyed by these spoiler-rich discussions. Yet for knowledgeable fans of the show, this book has little to recommend it.

Editing is lax here, as well. Most of these discussions would be better at half their present length, and even the homilies are too wordy: surely “When nobody believes in you, keep believing in yourself” should read simply “Believe in yourself,” while another lesson, “You’re only truly old when you decide you’re old” should certainly read “You’re as old as you feel.” The occasional odd misinterpretation also hinders this book, as when, discussing the ending of “Kick the Can,” Dawidziak claims: “[I]t’s too late for Ben, at least for this night and this summer. Maybe, if the screams of playing children become a lure rather than an annoyance to Ben, there will be another chance to grab the magic…another chance to play kick the can.” But nothing in the episode supports this. Everything we see leads to the conclusion that, while the newly-young Charlie and his friends will play Kick the Can in their youthful heaven forever, Ben has missed his chance; while the magical children are now immortal, he will die old, bitter, and alone. It’s Ben’s fate that lends “Kick the Can” its painful poignancy; Dawidziak’s odd misreading only robs the episode of its meaning.

Finally, a word about the celebrity names attached to this book. On the back cover the publisher has proudly proclaimed the presence within the text of what are billed as “mini-essays” from the likes of Robert Redford and others, but if readers hope for a serious reflection from Mr. Redford on his episode (“Nothing in the Dark”)—memories of the shoot, say, thoughts about the story itself, how the episode affected his career—they are doomed to disappointment. The star’s “mini-essay” is exactly one sentence long. Even then, Redford beats out George Clayton Johnson, whose mini-essay is precisely five words long, and the words don’t even comprise a complete sentence. The ultimate prize for “mini,” however, is taken by writer James Grady, whose “essay” runs exactly one word. (In the interest of avoiding spoilers, that word shall not be revealed here.)

Alas, despite Dawidziak’s obvious love of TZ, Everything I Need to Know I Learned in the Twilight Zone serves only as evidence that the possibilities of TZ tributes are now most likely exhausted.

ANSWERS: a) “Nightmare at 20,000 Feet”; b) “Steel”; c) “I Shot an Arrow Into the Air”; d) “Time Enough at Last”; e) “The Monsters are Due on Maple Street” and “The Shelter.”

Everything I Need to Know I Learned in the Twilight Zone by Mark Dawidziak is available on February 28, 2017.